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College Readiness Standards - English  

E.I.TOPIC DEVELOPMENT IN TERMS OF PURPOSE AND FOCUS

E.I.a.            Score Range 13–15

E.I.b.            Score Range 16–19

E.I.b.1.        Identify the basic purpose or role of a specified phrase or sentence

E.I.b.2.        Delete a clause or sentence because it is obviously irrelevant to the essay

E.I.c.            Score Range 20–23

E.I.c.1.        Identify the central idea or main topic of a straightforward piece of writing

E.I.c.2.        Determine relevancy when presented with a variety of sentence-level details

E.I.d.            Score Range 24–27

E.I.d.1.        Identify the focus of a simple essay, applying that knowledge to add a sentence that sharpens that focus or to determine if an essay has met a specified goal

E.I.d.2.        Delete material primarily because it disturbs the flow and development of the paragraph

E.I.d.3.        Add a sentence to accomplish a fairly straightforward purpose such as illustrating a given statement

E.I.e.            Score Range 28–32

E.I.e.1.        Apply an awareness of the focus and purpose of a fairly involved essay to determine the rhetorical effect and suitability of an existing phrase or sentence, or to determine the need to delete plausible but irrelevant material

E.I.e.2.        Add a sentence to accomplish a subtle rhetorical purpose such as to emphasize, to add supporting detail, or to express meaning through connotation

E.I.f.             Score Range 33–36

E.I.f.1.         Determine whether a complex essay has accomplished a specific purpose

E.I.f.2.         Add a phrase or sentence to accomplish a complex purpose, often expressed in terms of the main focus of the essay

  
 

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E.II.       ORGANIZATION, UNITY AND COHERENCE

E.II.a.          Score Range 13–15

E.II.a.1.      Use conjunctive adverbs or phrases to show time relationships in simple narrative essays (e.g., then, this time)

E.II.b.          Score Range 16–19

E.II.b.1.      Select the most logical place to add a sentence in a paragraph

E.II.c.          Score Range 20–23

E.II.c.1.       Use conjunctive adverbs or phrases to express straightforward logical relationships (e.g., first, afterward, in response)

E.II.c.2.       Decide the most logical place to add a sentence in an essay

E.II.c.3.       Add a sentence that introduces a simple paragraph

E.II.d.          Score Range 24–27

E.II.d.1.      Determine the need for conjunctive adverbs or phrases to create subtle logical connections between sentences (e.g., therefore, however, in addition)

E.II.d.2.      Rearrange the sentences in a fairly uncomplicated paragraph for the sake of logic

E.II.d.3.      Add a sentence to introduce or conclude the essay or to provide a transition between paragraphs when the essay is fairly straightforward

E.II.e.          Score Range 28–32

E.II.e.1.      Make sophisticated distinctions concerning the logical use of conjunctive adverbs or phrases, particularly when signaling a shift between paragraphs

E.II.e.2.      Rearrange sentences to improve the logic and coherence of a complex paragraph

E.II.e.3.      Add a sentence to introduce or conclude a fairly complex paragraph

E.II.f.           Score Range 33–36

E.II.f.1.       Consider the need for introductory sentences or transitions, basing decisions on a thorough understanding of both the logic and rhetorical effect of the paragraph and essay  
 

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E.III.    WORD CHOICE IN TERMS OF STYLE, TONE, CLARITY AND ECONOMY

E.III.a.        Score Range 13–15

E.III.a.1.     Revise sentences to correct awkward and confusing arrangements of sentence elements

E.III.a.2.     Revise vague nouns and pronouns that create obvious logic problems

E.III.b.        Score Range 16–19

E.III.b.1.     Delete obviously synonymous and wordy material in a sentence

E.III.b.2.     Revise expressions that deviate from the style of an essay

E.III.c.        Score Range 20–23

E.III.c.1.     Delete redundant material when information is repeated in different parts of speech (e.g., "alarmingly startled")

E.III.c.2.     Use the word or phrase most consistent with the style and tone of a fairly straightforward essay

E.III.c.3.     Determine the clearest and most logical conjunction to link clauses

E.III.d.        Score Range 24–27

E.III.d.1.     Revise a phrase that is redundant in terms of the meaning and logic of the entire sentence

E.III.d.2.     Identify and correct ambiguous pronoun references

E.III.d.3.     Use the word or phrase most appropriate in terms of the content of the sentence and tone of the essay

E.III.e.        Score Range 28–32

E.III.e.1.     Correct redundant material that involves sophisticated vocabulary and sounds acceptable as conversational English (e.g., "an aesthetic viewpoint" versus "the outlook of an aesthetic viewpoint")

E.III.e.2.     Correct vague and wordy or clumsy and confusing writing containing sophisticated language

E.III.f.         Score Range 33–36

E.III.f.1.     Delete redundant material that involves subtle concepts or that is redundant in terms of the paragraph as a whole  
 

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E.IV.      SENTENCE STRUCTURE AND FORMATION

E.IV.a.         Score Range 13–15

E.IV.a.1.     Use conjunctions or punctuation to join simple clauses

E.IV.a.2.     Revise shifts in verb tense between simple clauses in a sentence or between simple adjoining sentences

E.IV.b.         Score Range 16–19

E.IV.b.1.     Determine the need for punctuation and conjunctions to avoid awkward-sounding sentence fragments and fused sentences

E.IV.b.2.     Decide the appropriate verb tense and voice by considering the meaning of the entire sentence

E.IV.c.         Score Range 20–23

E.IV.c.1.     Recognize and correct marked disturbances of sentence flow and structure (e.g., participial phrase fragments, missing or incorrect relative pronouns, dangling or misplaced modifiers)

E.IV.d.         Score Range 24–27

E.IV.d.1.     Revise to avoid faulty placement of phrases and faulty coordination and subordination of clauses in sentences with subtle structural problems

E.IV.d.2.     Maintain consistent verb tense and pronoun person on the basis of the preceding clause or sentence

E.IV.e.         Score Range 28–32

E.IV.e.1.     Use sentence-combining techniques, effectively avoiding problematic comma splices, run-on sentences, and sentence fragments, especially in sentences containing compound subjects or verbs

E.IV.e.2.     Maintain a consistent and logical use of verb tense and pronoun person on the basis of information in the paragraph or essay as a whole

E.IV.f.          Score Range 33–36

E.IV.f.1.      Work comfortably with long sentences and complex clausal relationships within sentences, avoiding weak conjunctions between independent clauses and maintaining parallel structure between clauses

  

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E.V.         CONVENTIONS OF USAGE

E.V.a.           Score Range 13–15

E.V.a.1.       Solve such basic grammatical problems as how to form the past and past participle of irregular but commonly used verbs and how to form comparative and superlative adjectives

E.V.b.           Score Range 16–19

E.V.b.1.       Solve such grammatical problems as whether to use an adverb or adjective form, how to ensure straightforward subject-verb and pronoun-antecedent agreement, and which preposition to use in simple contexts

E.V.b.2.       Recognize and use the appropriate word in frequently confused pairs such as there and their, past and passed, and led and lead

E.V.c.           Score Range 20–23

E.V.c.1.       Use idiomatically appropriate prepositions, especially in combination with verbs (e.g., long for, appeal to)

E.V.c.2.       Ensure that a verb agrees with its subject when there is some text between the two

E.V.d.           Score Range 24–27

E.V.d.1.       Ensure that a pronoun agrees with its antecedent when the two occur in separate clauses or sentences

E.V.d.2.       Identify the correct past and past participle forms of irregular and infrequently used verbs and form present-perfect verbs by using have rather than of

E.V.e.           Score Range 28–32

E.V.e.1.       Correctly use reflexive pronouns, the possessive pronouns its and your, and the relative pronouns who and whom

E.V.e.2.       Ensure that a verb agrees with its subject in unusual situations (e.g., when the subject-verb order is inverted or when the subject is an indefinite pronoun)

E.V.f.            Score Range 33–36

E.V.f.1.       Provide idiomatically and contextually appropriate prepositions following verbs in situations involving sophisticated language or ideas

E.V.f.2.       Ensure that a verb agrees with its subject when a phrase or clause between the two suggests a different number for the verb  
 

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E.VI.      CONVENTIONS OF PUNCTUATION

E.VI.a.              Score Range 13–15

E.VI.a.1.          Delete commas that create basic sense problems (e.g., between verb and direct object)

E.VI.b.              Score Range 16–19

E.VI.b.1.          Provide appropriate punctuation in straightforward situations (e.g., items in a series)

E.VI.b.2.          Delete commas that disturb the sentence flow (e.g., between modifier and modified element)

E.VI.c.               Score Range 20–23

E.VI.c.1.           Use commas to set off simple parenthetical phrases

E.VI.c.2.           Delete unnecessary commas when an incorrect reading of the sentence suggests a pause that should be punctuated (e.g., between verb and direct object clause)

E.VI.d.              Score Range 24–27

E.VI.d.1.          Use punctuation to set off complex parenthetical phrases

E.VI.d.2.          Recognize and delete unnecessary commas based on a careful reading of a complicated sentence (e.g., between the elements of a compound subject or compound verb joined by and)

E.VI.d.3.          Use apostrophes to indicate simple possessive nouns

E.VI.d.4.          Recognize inappropriate uses of colons and semicolons

E.VI.e.              Score Range 28–32

E.VI.e.1.          Use commas to set off a nonessential/ nonrestrictive appositive or clause

E.VI.e.2.          Deal with multiple punctuation problems (e.g., compound sentences containing unnecessary commas and phrases that may or may not be parenthetical)

E.VI.e.3.          Use an apostrophe to show possession, especially with irregular plural nouns

E.VI.e.4.          Use a semicolon to indicate a relationship between closely related independent clauses

E.VI.f.               Score Range 33–36

E.VI.f.1.           Use a colon to introduce an example or an elaboration

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